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Mohamed Mahmoud Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Reference letter

Hello everyone,

Good day.

I've received this reference letter from my manager, he mentioned all my responsibility in management to strength my situation specially i work as a systems engineer but i feel there are a lot of mistakes. So, i would like to check it so i can decide if i'll send it or edit or i'll ask another one from my customers.

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Date: ../../....

Dear Sir / Madam,

It is with great pleasure that I recommend Mohamed El Sayed for admission to your MBA program. I have been Mohamed’s direct superior for the past 3 years. In his role as System Engineer, Mohamed took on a broad spectrum of tasks. He manages our SLAs with all customers and know how to build a good business relation with them. He is also in an unofficial leadership role. And was a trainer for his new colleagues, many of them seek his advice and support. Mohamed is always there for them and is quite comfortable in the role. I feel his budding leadership abilities will become even more effective in a business school setting.

Mohamed oversaw the daily operations within the assigned area and work towards meeting business objectives by motivating and guiding a team of professionals. He also collaborated with the HR department for recruitment, interviewed and selected candidates for Technical Team and impart training to team members to enhance professional skills and improve job performance. In plus he Held performance reviews for the team, identified areas of improvement, he has a great managerial skills and his time management skills is accurate in addition his technical responsibility.

Mohamed is skilled at identifying the most important issues, even in the most complex situations. With his business acumen and his strong commitment to deliver great and meaningful results, He was a great member to his department in specific and the company in general.

While it will be hard to replace someone as productive and energetic as Mohamed El Sayed, I am sure that obtaining an MBA education is the right way for him to hone his already impressive qualities as a business manager. I highly recommend him without reservation, and I am most certain he will make a great addition to your MBA program.

Sincerely,

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Dear Si r/M adam, It is with great pleasure that I recommend Mohamed El Sayed for admission to your MBA program. I have been Mohamed’s direct superior for the past 3 years. In his role as Syste ms Engineer, Mohamed took on a broad spectrum of tasks.

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  • Dear Si r/M adam, It is with great pleasure that I recommend Mohamed El Sayed for admission to your MBA program.
  • I have been Mohamed’s direct superior for the past 3 years.
  • In his role as Syste ms Engineer, Mohamed took on a broad spectrum of tasks.
  • He manages our SLAs with all our customers and know s how to build maintain a good business relation with them.
  • He is also in an unofficial leadership role.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

It is with great pleasure that I recommend Mohamed El Sayed for admission to your MBA program. I have been Mohamed’s direct superior for the past 3 years. In his role as Systems Engineer, Mohamed took on a broad spectrum of tasks. He manages our SLAs with all our customers and knows how to build maintain a good business relation with them
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Many thanks for your correction and concern but i would like to keep this sentence "He is also in an unofficial leadership role" cuz it's a real and it will strength my application. So, what do you think about it? thanks again for your time and everything, you helped me a lot.
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Mohamed MahmoudHe is has also often helped in an unofficial leadership role, And was a trainer providing training for his new colleagues, many of them whom regularly seek his advice and support.
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