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Bosun Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
reference letter
If you see any mistakes in the following sentences , can I have your comments? Also, I wonder if it sounds too negative. If so, what is a better way to express the same ideas?
( refernce letter for a so- so ESL student) college admission to
English-speaking country.
Since joining this program, XX has had difficulty adapting herself to classes taught in English. Accordingly, she has not focused on her studies consistently affecting her grades........ Although her English leaves room for improvement, she has potential as yet to be developed.
( refernce letter for a so- so ESL student) college admission to
English-speaking country.
Since joining this program, XX has had difficulty adapting herself to classes taught in English. Accordingly, she has not focused on her studies consistently affecting her grades........ Although her English leaves room for improvement, she has potential as yet to be developed.
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Write clearly and concisely: Since joining this program, XX has had difficulty in classes taught in English, so she has not performed well in her studies, and this is reflected in her grades. Although her English needs improvement, she has potential.
- Write clearly and concisely: Since joining this program, XX has had difficulty in classes taught in English, so she has not performed well in her studies, and this is reflected in her grades.
- Although her English needs improvement, she has potential.
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Write clearly and concisely:
Since joining this program, XX has had difficulty in classes taught in English, so she has not performed well in her studies, and this is reflected in her grades. Although her English needs improvement, she has potential.
Since joining this program, XX has had difficulty in classes taught in English, so she has not performed well in her studies, and this is reflected in her grades. Although her English needs improvement, she has potential.
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