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Redwine Posted 19 years ago
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*71*0 00Dear Mr00We are a well Established Professional Estate Agent, being Fellow Overseas Members Of The 01b00NAEA 02b00Specialising in The Sale of New and Resale Properties, May I ask If you Have An Overseas Agent Acting For Yourselves On the Costa Blanca/Calida Murcia Regions? If not Could you possibly be interested With Euro Select Estates Representing yourself here in Spain on a shared Commission Basis.00 00If you already Have and are Contented with your present Personnel Here In Spain, May I Thank you for Taking the Time to Read This Email and Maybe Keep Ourselves On File for any future Collaborations.00 00Yours Truly. John Latham..... 01b00Selling Houses on The Costa Blanca since 1998 .02b00 0-
  

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0The main problem is all those capital letters. Only use a capital at the start of sentences and at the start of proper nouns. It looks daft like this - why are you using so many?

— Nona the brit

  • 0The main problem is all those capital letters.
  • Only use a capital at the start of sentences and at the start of proper nouns.
  • It looks daft like this - why are you using so many?
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0The main problem is all those capital letters. Only use a capital at the start of sentences and at the start of proper nouns. It looks daft like this - why are you using so many? Alo, you are misusing yourselves and ourselves - these are not formal versions of you and us, they have different meanings altogether.02br
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00'acting for you' not 'acting for yourselves'02br
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0Thanks nona I am rubbish with English, apart from that would you say it was a letter worthy of sending?02br
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00take it you done the Jump? did one for charity many years ago but came down with a bump OUCH0-
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0You are not rubbish at English at all - just a bit addicted to capital letters. 05002br
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00Yes I did a charity one - oh yes I landed with quite a bump too but I loved it!010id1
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0nona can i be cheeky! if poss could you copy change and paste back to me.??? also see attached if you like a laugh taken in Far East.0-
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0That is cheeky.05000 You can change the words yourself and I've highlighted all the capital letters you should keep, change the rest. Off you go!02br
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01font00W02font00e are a well Established Professional Estate Agent, being Fellow Overseas Membe
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0Hi Nona, thanks , did sort before reply ,an look no CAPITALS 02br
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00Regards redwine0-
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