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Redundant words

Read the text. Some lines are correct but some have redundant words. Find and write them on separate answer sheet.
I did this exercise but i'm not sure whether i did right or not.
I hope you can check and correct the wrong sentences I did.
This text is quite long. Please be patient to read it.
Thank you.


This is a complicated subject, because of whether tourism is a good or a bad -> Of
thing depends on your point of view. It has advantages and disadvantages, in ->correct
my opinion. For tourists, being able to visit other countries and see different ->correct
ways of the life is great. These day, it's getting cheaper and cheaper to do ->the
this, so more and more people can afford for it. As a result, people from ->correct
different countries have a great amount understanding of each other, which -> amount
can only just be a good thing. Tourist also spend a lot of money and this is -> just
very good for the economies of the countries they visit. In fact, if not having ->correct
money from tourism would cause to some countries major problems and there -> to
are some places which rely themselves entirely on tourism. However, tourism ->themselves
does have some disadvantages. Some beautiful places have been spoiled ->correct
because of the number of people visiting at them. Small villages that had -> at
hardly much changed have been ruined by developers, who have built huge ->much
hotels there. Places that were used to be quiet are now crowded with tourists ->were
and local people often dislike this. Some tourists don't seem to have much -> correct
respect for the local people and treat them as badly. So it is hard to say in ->as
general whether tourism is good or not either because there are two sides to the argument. ->either
  

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