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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Redundant sentence?

In the 153 cases of M-ECWMPC, the 103 patients who had received surgery (at least one primary carcinoma surgery resection) had a better survival time than the 38 patients who only received RoC, though this is a poorer survival time than the time for those 3633 EC patients who were operated on.


This sentence seems a little strange to me. What do you think? Thanks.

  

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anonymous This sentence seems a little strange to me. What do you think? It's OK.

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  • anonymous This sentence seems a little strange to me.
  • What do you think?
  • It's OK.
  • I'd do this: In the 153 cases of M-ECWMPC, the 103 patients who had received at least one primary carcinoma surgery resection survived longer than the 38 patients who only received RoC, though this is shorter than for the 3633 EC patients who were operated upon.
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anonymousThis sentence seems a little strange to me. What do you think?

It's OK. I'd do this:

In the 153 cases of M-ECWMPC, the 103 patients who had received at least one primary carcinoma surgery resection survived longer than the 38 patients who only received RoC, though thi

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