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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Redundancy
Is there any redundancy in the following sentences I’ve written? Have I logically expressed my ideas in these statements?
In our school, doing graffiti arts is a major offense because it is considered a form of vandalism. After all, how can you be motivated to learn in an environment where you see nothing but scribbles or scratches on the walls, boards, doors, or desks?
In our school, doing graffiti arts is a major offense because it is considered a form of vandalism. After all, how can you be motivated to learn in an environment where you see nothing but scribbles or scratches on the walls, boards, doors, or desks?
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Repetition is not necessarily redundancy. "
- Repetition is not necessarily redundancy.
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Repetition is not necessarily redundancy.
"doing graffiti arts" should probably be just "graffiti."
"doing graffiti arts" should probably be just "graffiti."
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deadratRepetition is not necessarily redundancy."doing graffiti arts" should probably be just "graffiti."That's a good point. Calling it "arts" is opinion, not fact.
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