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Tscalasal Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Redudant sentence. Help? Tks

"The Government shall establish mechanisms for community participation in mining projects implemented in the area occupied by the communities"
  

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The sentence is rather awkward. Do you want suggestions for making it clearer?

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The sentence is rather awkward. Do you want suggestions for making it clearer?
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Yes, please. Thank you!
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The Government shall establish polices (pass laws?) so that members of a community can (will be able to/encouraged to) participate in mining projects local to the community.
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Thanks! "encouraged to particpate" = perfect. That's what the law means Emotion: smile
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