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English 1b3 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Reduced phrase - adverb ;once more'

The horse, that ghost-eyed Palomino once more, was docile enough until she came back to reclaim it.

Is the underlined phrase reduced and an idiomatic way of saying something like 'The horse, that ghost-eyed Palomino I encountered once more, was docile...'

Is this reduction typical with the adverb 'once more'?

Thank you
  

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Frankly, without further context, I can myself make nothing of 'once more' there, though your explanation seems reasonable. And which one is the horse, 'she' or 'it'?

  • Frankly, without further context, I can myself make nothing of 'once more' there, though your explanation seems reasonable.
  • And which one is the horse, 'she' or 'it'?
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Frankly, without further context, I can myself make nothing of 'once more' there, though your explanation seems reasonable. And which one is the horse, 'she' or 'it'?
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Thanks. 'It' is the horse. Though I have no additional context, I can say the writer encounters the horse earlier on, describing its eyes. I'm more just curious as to whether or not this reduction is common with 'once more.'
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The reduction seems extreme to me. I'd put it down to poor style.
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The writer appeared to use good grammar in most cases throughout the book. He seemed to follow a lot of grammar rules to the enth degree, which is more than I can say for a lot of writers. He wrote this sentence, which shows he is one of 'those' people:

The race involved running, hiking, horse riding, at all of which I'm a novice.

And he also used possessive case pronouns
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I can't read a book without analysing this stuff. It's a curse.-- Yes, I'd say it's time to move on. I certainly pay little attention to that sort of thing—I leave that responsibility to the publishing house.

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