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Fire1 Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Reduced non-defining clause qualifying a pronoun

?A. There was a black van next to him, murdered by a gangster.
B. ?There was a black van next to him, eating a piece of pizza.

I know that sentences A and B are not natural sentences, because both could be read either as the van was murdered and eating or "him" was murdered and eating,
but since there's a lot of strange sentence constructions used in English novels, I'd like to know whether I could meet sentences like A and B.

To explain further, I wrote "murdered by a gangster" and "eating a piece of pizza" to qualify "him", omitting "who was".

So my question is, can I meet such a sentence construction as used in A and B where this past participial phrase "murdered by a gangster" and this present participial phrase "eating a piece of pizza" qualify the object pronoun "him" ?


I'd like to know whether I could meet such constructions in each case "past participial phrase" and "present participial phrase".


And if possible, could you make some examples?

  

Top answer

You have to use a noun, not a pronoun. There was a black van next to the man murdered by a gangster. There was a black van next to the man eating a piece of pizza.

  • You have to use a noun, not a pronoun.
  • There was a black van next to the man murdered by a gangster.
  • There was a black van next to the man eating a piece of pizza.
  • Pronouns such as someone or anyone can be qualified by a restrictive clause.
  • Someone eating a piece of pizza was next to the black van.
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You have to use a noun, not a pronoun.

There was a black van next to the man murdered by a gangster.
There was a black van next to the man eating a piece of pizza.

Pronouns such as someone or anyone can be qualified by a restrictive clause.

Someone eating a piece of pizza was next to the black van.

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