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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Redraft the email.

Hello ,

Timeliness is next to godliness! That's my motto. So the next time you are late for work beware.

I wish bring to your kind notice that repeatedly, again and again, you will have been coming late for your shift and this had inconvenienced all your esteemed colleagues. This is to inform you that such indisciplined behaviour will not be tolerated in our esteemed organisation.

Thanks,

XYA

Can you please redraft the above contents for me
  

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Hi, Hello , Timeliness is next to godliness! That's my motto. So the next time you are late for work, beware!

— Clive

  • Hi, Hello , Timeliness is next to godliness!
  • That's my motto.
  • So the next time you are late for work, beware!
  • I wish to bring to your kind notice that repeatedly , again and again, you will have been coming late for your shift and this has had inconvenienced all your esteemed colleagues.
  • This is to inform you that such undisciplined behaviour will not be tolerated in our esteemed organisation.
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Hi,

Hello ,

Timeliness is next to godliness! That's my motto. So the next time you are late for work, beware!

I wish to bring to your kind notice that repeatedly, again and again, you will have been coming late for your shift and this has had inconvenienced all your esteemed colleagues. This is to inform you that such u
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