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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Redecorating a room
Can someone kindly proofread my writing?, Many thanks
Hi Dario,
Hope you are fine. I am writing you a letter, because I am thinking of redecorating my room and I am sure you are the perfect person to help me, due to the fact that you are studying interior design. Additionally, we have the same sort of taste, for this reason all your suggestions would be highly appreciated. As you know my room is the same since I was a teenager, hence I think it is time to change it. I am very interested in feng-shui, have you heard about that? , combine harmony and bring balance to your habitat. I want a room that expresses my inner, a room where you can feel peace, a cozy place to rest and study as well.$
I have a lot of ideas, but I don’t know how to put altogether into a project; that’s why I need your advice, I want to materialize my feelings into my room. One important thing that I almost missed, my budget is just 2,000. I don’t mind buying old stuffs, if they are in good conditions. If you know any good places to buy furniture, please let me know. I think the best thing is meet us this weekend in order to discuss the details. How about Saturday morning?, you can come to my apartment and we can draw-up together the design. I will prepare a nice food for you. Please let me know in advance by email or phone if you are not able to come this weekend.
I look forward to redecorating my old room
Lots of love
Hi Dario,
Hope you are fine. I am writing you a letter, because I am thinking of redecorating my room and I am sure you are the perfect person to help me, due to the fact that you are studying interior design. Additionally, we have the same sort of taste, for this reason all your suggestions would be highly appreciated. As you know my room is the same since I was a teenager, hence I think it is time to change it. I am very interested in feng-shui, have you heard about that? , combine harmony and bring balance to your habitat. I want a room that expresses my inner, a room where you can feel peace, a cozy place to rest and study as well.$
I have a lot of ideas, but I don’t know how to put altogether into a project; that’s why I need your advice, I want to materialize my feelings into my room. One important thing that I almost missed, my budget is just 2,000. I don’t mind buying old stuffs, if they are in good conditions. If you know any good places to buy furniture, please let me know. I think the best thing is meet us this weekend in order to discuss the details. How about Saturday morning?, you can come to my apartment and we can draw-up together the design. I will prepare a nice food for you. Please let me know in advance by email or phone if you are not able to come this weekend.
I look forward to redecorating my old room
Lots of love
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Hi Dario, Hope you are fine. I'm writing you a letter, because I'm thinking of redecorating my room. I'm sure you are the perfect person to help me because you are studying interior design.
- Hi Dario, Hope you are fine.
- I'm writing you a letter, because I'm thinking of redecorating my room.
- I'm sure you are the perfect person to help me because you are studying interior design.
- Additionally, we have the same taste.
- All your suggestions would be highly appreciated.
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Hi Dario,
Hope you are fine. I'm writing you a letter, because I'm thinking of redecorating my room. I'm sure you are the perfect person to help me because you are studying interior design. Additionally, we have the same taste. All your suggestions would be highly appreciated. As you know my room is the same since I was a teenager. I think it is time to change it. I'm very interested in
Hope you are fine. I'm writing you a letter, because I'm thinking of redecorating my room. I'm sure you are the perfect person to help me because you are studying interior design. Additionally, we have the same taste. All your suggestions would be highly appreciated. As you know my room is the same since I was a teenager. I think it is time to change it. I'm very interested in
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Dario is your friend, right? Keep it informal.
e.g. looking forward to redecorating my old room (formal)
All your suggestions would be highly appreciated. (Formal)
I also found some grammatical errors in the letter.
e.g. looking forward to redecorating my old room (formal)
All your suggestions would be highly appreciated. (Formal)
I also found some grammatical errors in the letter.
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Finally, this isn't a grammar point, but where in here do you say "I have a favor to ask" or "Would you please...?" You seem to assume your friend will be eager to do this - and perhaps he will be, but ASKING rather than assuming would be nice.
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