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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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BOnjour ! Je suis en classe de seconde dans un lycée francais , et je dois ecrire une redaction en anglais me présentant, et faisant un portrait chinois !
Voici mon texte , merci de le corriger et de me donner de nouvelles idées ^^ ( je vous le di davance , ce n'est pas terrible ! ^^) urgent !!!
il est composé de ma presentation et d'un portrait chinois!
My name is Falilou, I am Senegalese, I’m 16, and I was born in November 1996, that’s why my sign of zodiac is scorpion. It is said that the Scorpios are honest and loyal and that they are idealistic, one said that the Scorpios are sensible, and that they have a real strong personality, it can be a quality but sometimes, a negative aspect ... I love sports likes soccer, basketball, and tennis because I have plenty of energy. Personally, I do not trust in astrology and I do not calculate any event of the future with its help, but I think that’s it’s funny to read! My hobbies are listening to music, looking at TV, eating, sleeping, or, of course doing some sports!
I like technology so if I was a phone, I would be a Samsung galaxy S, because it’s a very performing phone, with a very beautiful style. I like robotic so if I was a computer, I would be a Toshiba because I know that the Japanese industry makes the difference in the quality of the productions. If I was an animal, I would be a “talkative” because one said that I talk a lot! If I was another animal, I would be a lion, because sometimes I can be very tenacious, brave and aggressive to defend my territory.
Voici mon texte , merci de le corriger et de me donner de nouvelles idées ^^ ( je vous le di davance , ce n'est pas terrible ! ^^) urgent !!!
il est composé de ma presentation et d'un portrait chinois!
My name is Falilou, I am Senegalese, I’m 16, and I was born in November 1996, that’s why my sign of zodiac is scorpion. It is said that the Scorpios are honest and loyal and that they are idealistic, one said that the Scorpios are sensible, and that they have a real strong personality, it can be a quality but sometimes, a negative aspect ... I love sports likes soccer, basketball, and tennis because I have plenty of energy. Personally, I do not trust in astrology and I do not calculate any event of the future with its help, but I think that’s it’s funny to read! My hobbies are listening to music, looking at TV, eating, sleeping, or, of course doing some sports!
I like technology so if I was a phone, I would be a Samsung galaxy S, because it’s a very performing phone, with a very beautiful style. I like robotic so if I was a computer, I would be a Toshiba because I know that the Japanese industry makes the difference in the quality of the productions. If I was an animal, I would be a “talkative” because one said that I talk a lot! If I was another animal, I would be a lion, because sometimes I can be very tenacious, brave and aggressive to defend my territory.
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You've got a very impressive introduction. How about creating your account here?
GN
You've got a very impressive introduction. How about creating your account here?
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I read French, but I can't speak it very well or write it at all. I had never heard of portrait chinois before. We play 20 questions or animal, mineral or vegetable.
My name is Falilou. I am Senegalese. I’m 16, and I was born in November1996, that’s which is why my sign is Scorpio. It is said that the
My name is Falilou. I am Senegalese. I’m 16, and I was born in November
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Oh my ***, I thought it was just an introduction, as it started with many French words. Sorry, I did not know it is a question so I did not pay much attention.
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