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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Rectify one's errors thoroughly
Please check the following paragraph.
I still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong. One day, as a hot-blooded boy, I quarreled with a classmate over trivial things and berated against the opposite side. At that time, he harshly told me the right solution to the squabble, and this incident made him fairly sad because I was a good student in his eyes. After that, I also corrected my behavior / rectified my errors thoroughly.
I still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong. One day, as a hot-blooded boy, I quarreled with a classmate over trivial things and berated against the opposite side. At that time, he harshly told me the right solution to the squabble, and this incident made him fairly sad because I was a good student in his eyes. After that, I also corrected my behavior / rectified my errors thoroughly.
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Hi, I still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong. One day, as a hot-blooded boy, I quarreled with a classmate over trivial things and berated my opponent. against the opposite side.
- Hi, I still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong.
- One day, as a hot-blooded boy, I quarreled with a classmate over trivial things and berated my opponent.
- against the opposite side.
- At that time, he harshly told me the right solution to the squabble, and this incident made him fairly sad because I was a good student in his eyes.
- After that, I also corrected my behavior / rectified my errors thoroughly.
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Hi,
I still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong. One day, as a hot-blooded boy, I quarreled with a classmate over trivial things and berated my opponent.against the opposite side. At that time, he harshly told me the right solution
I still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong. One day, as a hot-blooded boy, I quarreled with a classmate over trivial things and berated my opponent.
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contiluoI still remembered that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we did something wrong.I still remember that he liked to make us laugh when he was happy, but he would admonish us if we stepped out of line.
You still "remember", do you not? "stepped out of line" is more specific and makes sense in
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