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Letter of Reference



Attn: Alan P. Smith





While studying medicine in our programme, Alan was one of the top ranking student overall. In addition, to his school work, has demonstrated a strong interest in research. Alan actively participated in Students Research Society. During 5th year of studying he performed research “Diagnostic value of medium molecules detection in newborn urine and blood” which resulted in Vice-Chancellor Award for the best student work.

When Alan was 6-year student he was elected for International Student Exchange Programme. Annually only 3-4 students of our School get this opportunity. A. Smith spent 1 month in and got very good recommendations from Dr Ben Gurion, a local programme supervisor.



Alan was engaged in research activity and then continued the work independently at PhD level.

It is important to note leadership skills of A. Smith. He was elected as a student group leader and held this position throughout all 6 years’ period of studies. In residency he was a Chief Resident.

At the present time A Smith is a last-year PhD student at N. Paradise State Medical School. He is finishing his PhD research in the field of infant infections. He conducts and presents the work successfully throughout all the Europe (, , , ). The list of his publications and awards is also impressive. Also Alan works as teaching assistant at the Department of Pediatrics of the School. 

In summary, Alan is an intelligent person who possesses the necessary motivation and dedication in all what he does. Academically, he is the most outstanding PhD student during his studies in . Recently he has been nominated for United Federation Government Scholarship for PhD students (1 award per university annually). He displayed a great initiative to learn and a firm commitment to always be on the road toward improvement. Alan Smith clearly has the combination of personal and intellectual strengths to be a competent specialist and to pursue a very successful career in medicine.