Recommendation letter for master scholarship. please check it for me

I need 2 recommendation letter. this is the second one.

I am writing a letter on behalf of Ms. Minh Phuong, a graduate student at Banking Academy. I can recommend Phuong without reservations. She is, without a doubt, one of the most excellent students I have had a pleasure of working with.

My bank was one of the sponsors for her club’s events in Banking Academy including the events of Jobs for Students (2015) which she was the main media leader. I was really impressed with the content and performance of this event which she built up. With the aim to improve the knowledge as well as skills for students in the interview, this event was an effective bridge between banking students and financial organizations and commercial banks which are the main employers of that source of labor. I appreciated her creation and meaningful contribution to the society.

Additionally, Phuong was a potential negotiator with convincing arguments and correct attitudes in the discussion. Specially, she always kept up with the deadlines which made us satisfied and trust on her. All things consider, she was one of those rare students who process necessary working ability as well as professional attitudes. I totally believed that she is one of the brilliant students with greater social contribution with the higher education you offer.

Sincerely,