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Mariella Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Recommendation letter

Hello!

I would like to apply to a university in the UK and I would really appreciate if somebody could help me with my recommendation letter; I worked as a seasonal receptionist and the front desk manager told me to write the letter myself.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to recommend Miss X for your International W programme.

I first met Miss X while she was working as a trainee receptionist under my charge. While working front desk as a part of Tourism and Catering school work placement programme, X demonstrated excellent communication and interpersonal skills. I was impressed by her eagerness to learn new things, work hard, and above all, her skill to handle difficult clients. Therefore, after she completed her high school studies we decided to offer her a position of a seasonal receptionist which she accepted during the high season (July/August) in 2008 and 2009.

X possesses all the necessary qualities to succeed in this industry; pleasant personality, sincere interest in the people she is serving as well as outstanding organizational skills. She is very willing to take over new challenges and responsibilities. On one occasion when our hotel was in a busy period, we required a candidate to help us in the housekeeping department. She volunteered to perform that duty and thus demonstrated a flexible approach to her work.

I highly recommend X for your programme and hope that you will carefully consider admission application.

Yours faithfully,
  

Top answer

Dear Mariella, You have made a valiant effort and created a good letter. I wish I could have had the opportunity to write my own recommendation letters! Bravo.

  • Dear Mariella, You have made a valiant effort and created a good letter.
  • I wish I could have had the opportunity to write my own recommendation letters!
  • Bravo.
  • They are just suggestions.
  • I hope you are admitted to the programme.
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Dear Mariella,

You have made a valiant effort and created a good letter. I wish I could have had the opportunity to write my own recommendation letters! Bravo.

I have highlighted my suggested changes.They are just suggestions.


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