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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Recommendation... help please

hello , here is the dead. I want to go to study in British university and for it I need recommendation. My english teacher told me that she would write it but she left for a vecation for two weeks and I can`t wait that long. So she told me to write it myself and put her e-mail , phone and name on it. Well i tryed my best , could someone help to correct it please , because my main language is not english.

Here it is:

01 September 2009







To Whom It May Concern:







I am very pleased to recommend my student, Sergej Arngold, into your undergraduate program for the next coming academic year. As his teacher, I saw his progress during the 2 years when I taught him English. He is energetic, diligent, intelligent, creative, quick learner and has a high level of confidence. Through those years he made a deep impression on me as a student and as a person.



For the first time we became acquainted in 2005, when he began to study first-year at Vilnius University International Business School. His knowledge was one of the best in his class. He could freely express his thoughts and communicate verbally without any holdback. He was an exemplary student, he had put a large amount of extra effort in helping the others students.



Although he had a year remaining at our university, he decided to finish his bachelor degree abroad. I support his decision and I am sure that he will succeed to finish his studies abroad.

I am confident that with the help of your University he will acquire the knowledge and experience that will help him succeed in the future.



To conclude, I would like to restate my strong recommendation for Sergej Arngold. If you have any further questions regarding Sergej's ability or this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me using the information bellow.



Yours Sincerely,
  

Top answer

I'm not a teacher Good Luck with your studies To Whom It May Concern: I am very pleased to recommend my student, Sergej Arngold, (into) for your undergraduate program for the next ( coming ) academic year. As his teacher, I saw his progress during the two years while teaching him English. He is energetic, diligent, intelligent, creative, quick learner and has a high level of confidence.

  • I'm not a teacher Good Luck with your studies To Whom It May Concern: I am very pleased to recommend my student, Sergej Arngold, (into) for your undergraduate program for the next ( coming ) academic year.
  • As his teacher, I saw his progress during the two years while teaching him English.
  • He is energetic, diligent, intelligent, creative, quick learner and has a high level of confidence.
  • Through those years he made a deep impression on me as a student and as a person.
  • For the first time we became acquainted in 2005, when he began to study first-year at Vilnius University International Business School.
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I'm not a teacher Emotion: smile
Good Luck with your studies
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thank you very much

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