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Mashka Ananenkova Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Recommendarion letter
Well, my dean told me to write recommendation letter to me by myself. I wrote and somebody, could u check my composition, please???!!!)))
here it's
During 1, 5 years Ananenkova Maria, the student of the Department for Economics and Management in the chemical industry and nature management, has been showing herself in various sides and different situations. She took part in great number of activities and conferences, which were not only in our university. She is responsible senior student of her group, a member of our cheerleading group, which take part in different competitions in St. Petersburg. Also she helps to organize various universities’ occasions and she was a member of the international organization ESTIEM. On the other hand she wrote 2 research projects (works) for economic and chemical conference and in the future she is going to take part in university and international conferences.
To my mind, Maria is a very active student and a versatile person. She is not only very successful in education but she has time to help to out university starting with sport and ending with science activity. I know that her goal is to enter to Germany University and I support her choice. Moreover, this person has all qualities for studying abroad and I hope she will achieve this aim.
here it's
During 1, 5 years Ananenkova Maria, the student of the Department for Economics and Management in the chemical industry and nature management, has been showing herself in various sides and different situations. She took part in great number of activities and conferences, which were not only in our university. She is responsible senior student of her group, a member of our cheerleading group, which take part in different competitions in St. Petersburg. Also she helps to organize various universities’ occasions and she was a member of the international organization ESTIEM. On the other hand she wrote 2 research projects (works) for economic and chemical conference and in the future she is going to take part in university and international conferences.
To my mind, Maria is a very active student and a versatile person. She is not only very successful in education but she has time to help to out university starting with sport and ending with science activity. I know that her goal is to enter to Germany University and I support her choice. Moreover, this person has all qualities for studying abroad and I hope she will achieve this aim.
Top answer
Hello Mashka; Usually these are called "Motivation Letters," and they are written in first person, not third person. Yours is very unusual in that respect. The letter could have a better structure and organization; it does not seem as logical as it could be.
- Hello Mashka; Usually these are called "Motivation Letters," and they are written in first person, not third person.
- Yours is very unusual in that respect.
- The letter could have a better structure and organization; it does not seem as logical as it could be.
- What is nature management?
- Is it some kind of environmental science?
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Hello Mashka;
Usually these are called "Motivation Letters," and they are written in first person, not third person. Yours is very unusual in that respect.
The letter could have a better structure and organization; it does not seem as logical as it could be. What is nature management? Is it some kind of environmental science?
I have made some suggestions.
During
Usually these are called "Motivation Letters," and they are written in first person, not third person. Yours is very unusual in that respect.
The letter could have a better structure and organization; it does not seem as logical as it could be. What is nature management? Is it some kind of environmental science?
I have made some suggestions.
During
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No, it's not motivation letter)))really)) it's my recommendation from my dean!!)) He told me to write it by myself))
Thanks u a lot for ur checking!!!It really helped me!!!!
Thanks u a lot for ur checking!!!It really helped me!!!!
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