Recommend letter

would you mind to help me to correct this recommend letter , because i never done this before.
this letter is not writen by the supervisor,because the student was tould to write it herself.
By the way thanks a lot !




I am taking great pleasure in recommending ***, one of my most outstanding and talented students as I am the dean of Marketing Management, to your graduate school of …for admission and assistantships.

I first noticed her while she was a sophomore in 2002, when she asked some questions beyond the Supply Chain Management taught in my class. Then her final exam, with the highest score of 97, and hard-working spirit, made a profound impression on me. Therefore, in her fourth grade in 2004, I gave her a chance to participate in my project of (), which is only attend by graduated students. To my surprise, she finished her research project more quickly than I thought, as an undergraduate student. After that, she told me she is interested in HR and hopes for me to help her. So she was allowed to work for another project titled “ ” recently and Now I am being her academic advisor, directing her academic paper research on ()

Besides she is diligent, confident, and intelligent, she is also an enthusiastic student, always eager to help her fellow students wherever it needs. She can cooperate and coordinate well with classmates, and they gave her high praise. At the beginning of this term, our department calculated all the students’ GPA to meet an order. She ranked the first out of fifty students and recommended to enter graduate program waived of the entrance examination. She rejected it because of pursuing her graduate degree on abroad

***'s great academic background and a variety of well-developed talents will guarantee considerable success in her future studies. I hope that you consider her application favorably. I will be delighted to see her realize her academic goals in your school. Should you need any further information about her, please contact me without hesitation.