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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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Reception desk

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This museum is open from 9:00 A.M. to 5:00 P.M., and there will be no ticketing one hour before closure. Pets, food and drinks are not allowed to take along for fear of making messy and dirty and hinding the rights of other visitors. We also offer foreign visitors with voice message service. If you are willing to get one, make your inquires at the reception desk for more information about procedures. We will start from this July to hold the Prehistorical Taiwanese Aboriginal Culture Exhibition, last for three months. A group over 20 people will get a special discount of 20 % off.
  

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Far, far too many words. This is the way it is done: The museum is open from 9 AM to 5 PM. No admittance after 4 PM.

  • Far, far too many words.
  • This is the way it is done: The museum is open from 9 AM to 5 PM.
  • No admittance after 4 PM.
  • Pets, food and drinks are not permitted.
  • We offer foreign visitors a voice message service: please inquire at the reception desk.
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Far, far too many words. This is the way it is done:

The museum is open from 9 AM to 5 PM. No admittance after 4 PM. Pets, food and drinks are not permitted. We offer foreign visitors a voice message service: please inquire at the reception desk. Our Prehistoric Taiwanese Aboriginal Culture Exhibition will run from July through
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Hi,

When you say a voice message service, do you mean a device that has a commentary on the exhibits in the person's native language?

Clive
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It means a device that has an audio tour on the exhibits in the visitor's native language, which includes Chinese, English, Japanese, French, German, Spanish, Russian, Korean, and so on.
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If we use "an audio tour guide" to replace "a voice message service," will it be better?
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Hi,

Yes.
'A voice messages service' sounds like it is related to phone calls.

Clive

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