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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance
Rebranding
We are rebranding our company. I need to write a email to be sent out to all our clients and stake holders.
In our firm, we help students choose the destination, course and institution that matches their personal circumstances such as academic, employment and financial background.
We place thousands of students in various institutions overseas.
In our firm, we help students choose the destination, course and institution that matches their personal circumstances such as academic, employment and financial background.
We place thousands of students in various institutions overseas.
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Are you asking for corrections of mistakes? This looks good. However, are you re branding or re naming your company?
- Are you asking for corrections of mistakes?
- This looks good.
- However, are you re branding or re naming your company?
- Your choice of words doesn't sound quite natural to me.
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Are you asking for corrections of mistakes? This looks good. However, are you rebranding or renaming your company? Your choice of words doesn't sound quite natural to me.
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