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Fizzi Posted 20 years ago
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Hi all,

Would somebody please help me with my sentences?

It is important therefore to undertake a systematic review on the quality of information in medical journals because drug promotion is a major source of drug information for health care professionals especially for newly-marketed drugs and known to mislead doctors’ decision making in treating patients more than they realized. This review would help researchers to have better understanding on the pharmaceutical promotion and the information gathered may help them in their future research.

Regards,

Dean
  

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Deanpijin Hi all, Would somebody please help me with my sentences? It is important therefore to undertake a systematic review o n the quality of information in medical journals because drug promotion is a major source of drug information for health care professionals , especially for newly-marketed drugs and known to mislead doctors’ decision making in treating patients more than they realized (sentence is too long. Break it up).

  • Deanpijin Hi all, Would somebody please help me with my sentences?
  • It is important therefore to undertake a systematic review o n the quality of information in medical journals because drug promotion is a major source of drug information for health care professionals , especially for newly-marketed drugs and known to mislead doctors’ decision making in treating patients more than they realized (sentence is too long.
  • Break it up).
  • This review would help researchers to have better understanding o n the pharmaceutical promotion and the information gathered may help them in their future research.
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Deanpijin
Hi all,

Would somebody please help me with my sentences?

It is important therefore to undertake a systematic review on the quality of information in medical journals because drug promotion is a major source of drug information for health care professionals, especially for newl
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How about this?

It is important therefore to undertake a systematic review on the quality of information in medical journals because pharmaceutical promotion is considered as a major source of drug information for health care professionals especially for newly-marketed drugs. Pharmaceutical promotion also known to mislead doctors’ decision making in treating patients
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DeanpijinHow about this?

It is important therefore to undertake a systematic review on the quality of information in medical journals because pharmaceutical promotion is considered as a major source of drug information for health care professionals especially for newly-marketed drugs. Pharmaceutical promotion __ (add a verb) also known to mi
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Thanks Julielai.

Regards,

Dean

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