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Kumenglish Posted 7 years ago
Grammar
Rearranging
I need our company profile details, services, existing client details and portfolio for rearranging the existing powerpoint presentation strategy which should be present our prospects in order to coax them.
Can I say like this in email?
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Instead of saying 'I need . . ', you should be more polite.
- Instead of saying 'I need .
- .
- ', you should be more polite.
- I assume you are going to do the rearranging, so state that clearly.
- I don't clearly understand some of what you have written, eg which should be present our prospects in order to coax them.
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Instead of saying 'I need . . . ', you should be more polite.
I assume you are going to do the rearranging, so state that clearly.
I don't clearly understand some of what you have written, eg which should be present our prospects in order to coax them. I've had to try to guess your meaning.
Say eg I am going to rearrange the existing PowerPoint presenta
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