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Stevenukd Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

REALLY HAVE FEELINGS

Dear Teachers,

1. When being intimate with each other, boy and girl are easy to create affection. A friendship will be a start for a beautiful love if two people really have feelings for each other.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

Top answer

The first sentence is not in the least natural [H] When close to one another, it is easy for a boy and girl to feel/develop affection. The second sentence is fine.

— Feebs11

  • The first sentence is not in the least natural [H] When close to one another, it is easy for a boy and girl to feel/develop affection.
  • The second sentence is fine.
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The first sentence is not in the least natural [H]

When close to one another, it is easy for a boy and girl to feel/develop affection.

The second sentence is fine.
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Feebs11The first sentence is not in the least natural [H]

Stevenukd. wrote: When being intimate with each other, boy and girl are easy to create affection. A friendship will be a start for a beautiful love if two people really have feelings for each other.

Feebs amended: When close to
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I strongly suggest you should use phrases and sentences found in English-language books, TV or radio, and only then start to invent.

At this present time, many of your phrases are very awkward, many of them from the cultural point of view (i.e. you don't really know how various English-speaking people naturally express themselves).

Use good models.
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