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Icchan fryas Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Realisation
I wrote this sentence in an essay. Is the sentence grammatically correct?
'The realization with all its pain dawned on me that I made a big mistake.'
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It would benefit from rearrangement, and your metaphor is mixed: The realization that I had made a big mistake descended on me with all its pain.
- It would benefit from rearrangement, and your metaphor is mixed: The realization that I had made a big mistake descended on me with all its pain.
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It would benefit from rearrangement, and your metaphor is mixed:
The realization that I had made a big mistake descended on me with all its pain.
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