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Re-alignment of the highway in 1963 completely blocked the former southern outlet of the depression, further enhancing its ability to retain water. The road surface also provided an additional source of runoff to the depression.

--> In 1963, the rebuilt highway prevented water from draining away from the southern outlet of the downhill slope. The depression( or downhill slope) could be able to retain more water. Additional water flew into the depression from the road.
  

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In 1963, the rebuilt highway prevented water from draining away from the southern outlet of the downhill slope. The depression (or downhill slope) could be able to retain more water. Additional water flew into the depression from the road.

  • In 1963, the rebuilt highway prevented water from draining away from the southern outlet of the downhill slope.
  • The depression (or downhill slope) could be able to retain more water.
  • Additional water flew into the depression from the road.
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In 1963, the rebuilt highway prevented water from draining away from the southern outlet of the downhill slope. The depression (or downhill slope) could be able to retain more water. Additional water flew into the depression from the road.
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could be able to--> was ablet o

flew-->flowed

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