Are you able to tell me if the following sentences read well to you?
We have received a few complaints regarding your trolley in the locker room. Please could you remove it from there as soon as possible?
It's fine. I would change the word order in the second sentence. "
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It's fine. I would change the word order in the second sentence. "Could you please remove it from there as soon as possible?"