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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Reached the terminal

Can I say,

The tortoise reached the terminal and went through the finishing line first.
  

Top answer

Two slight improvements: across the finish ing line.

  • Two slight improvements: across the finish ing line.
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Two slight improvements: across the finishing line.
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Hi,

The tortoise reached the terminal and went through the finishing line first.

We don't use the noun 'terminal' in this way. We use it a lot in talking about transportation,

eg an airline terminal, a bus terminal.

Here are better versions of your sentence.

The tortoise reached the finish first.

The tort
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CliveWe don't use the noun 'terminal' in this way. We use it a lot in talking about transportation,
eg an airline terminal, a bus terminal.
Good point, Clive. It's funny: I just pictured the finish line actually ata train station.

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