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S-C-3-1-3 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

RE: Pronouns.

Hi everyone,

I am writing a paper and am struggling with the pronouns in the following sentence. I am not sure if it is correct or how it should be properly done.

"Although Gulliver does not specifically state that the Emperor of Lilliput is King George I, his description of the emperor suggests that he symbolically represents King George I."

Thanks in advance,

Ian
  

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Your pronouns are OK per se, but your sentence could use other work: Although Swift does not specifically state that the Emperor of Lilliput is King George I, Gulliver's description of the emperor suggests that he symbolically represents the king .

  • Your pronouns are OK per se, but your sentence could use other work: Although Swift does not specifically state that the Emperor of Lilliput is King George I, Gulliver's description of the emperor suggests that he symbolically represents the king .
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Your pronouns are OK per se, but your sentence could use other work:

Although Swift does not specifically state that the Emperor of Lilliput is King George I, Gulliver's description of the emperor suggests that he symbolically represents the king.

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