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Mountain Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Re: Please proofread part of my essay

Thanks, would anyone else would like to edit to make it better?
  

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Ok, I have finished with the paper and also made some corrections. Please feel free to adjust anything that you think will make it sounds better. Thanks in advance!

  • Ok, I have finished with the paper and also made some corrections.
  • Please feel free to adjust anything that you think will make it sounds better.
  • Thanks in advance!
  • PS: My main goal was to provide detailed information on Responsible Investment and why it is important.
  • <---In this case, I don't feel very confident about shareholder activism...
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Ok, I have finished with the paper and also made some corrections. Please feel free to adjust anything that you think will make it sounds better. Thanks in advance!

PS: My main goal was to
provide detailed information on Responsible Investment and why it is important.<---In this case, I don't feel very confiden
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Overall, it looks fine, Mountain, including the section of shareholder activism. I have fixed some minor puntuation, etc and made some suggestions for rephrasing. The question marks indicate suggested changes that I am not sure preserve your meaning.

Socially Responsible Investment (SRI) has three different dynamic strategies, which are often combined. The best
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Mister, I thank you so much for what you have done. We need more people like you in this forum because I don't see that many people are doing this.

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