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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
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Re: Please Mr. Clive proofread
Hello,
Thank you for your time and effort .
Mr. Clive could you please edite part of my paregraph.I feel my sentences are not proper English.
- Second, I feel safer when my neighbours are nice people. For example, when Khomeini came to Iran, he ordered that it has been the deuty of every Muslim to keep an eye on his neighbour and if he knows who is apostate, a good Muslim will inform the Islamic forces. A good neighbour won't turn you into Islamic forces in the name of God.
Thank you for your time and effort .
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Hi, Second ly, I feel safer when my neighbours are nice people. For example, when Khomeini came to Iran, he ordered that it is the duty of every Muslim to keep an eye on his neighbour and , if he knows who is apostate, to inform the Islamic forces. Nevertheless, a good neighbour won't turn you in to the Islamic forces in the name of ***.
- Hi, Second ly, I feel safer when my neighbours are nice people.
- For example, when Khomeini came to Iran, he ordered that it is the duty of every Muslim to keep an eye on his neighbour and , if he knows who is apostate, to inform the Islamic forces.
- Nevertheless, a good neighbour won't turn you in to the Islamic forces in the name of ***.
- Clive
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Hi,
Secondly, I feel safer when my neighbours are nice people. For example, when Khomeini came to Iran, he ordered that it is the duty of every Muslim to keep an eye on his neighbour and, if he knows who is apostate, t
Secondly, I feel safer when my neighbours are nice people. For example, when Khomeini came to Iran, he ordered that it is the duty of every Muslim to keep an eye on his neighbour and, if he knows who is apostate, t
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