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Kawaiitiet Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Re: Please give me a hand to adjust my Covering Letter
(My add )
(Sender add)
Date: 10 Jan 2006
Dear Mr.XX/ Ms.YY
After have referred the advertisement in the Saigon Times Daily on 09 Jan 2006, I understand that your company is now looking for a Manager Assistant . I am very interested in it and hope that can have an opportunity to interview with the post mentioned.
As you will see from my enclosed CV, I have completed an intensive course in Communication English and also got a Certificate in Business English. Two years before, a Singapore company gave me an opportunity to put my theory learnt into practice and acquired the working experience. My responsibility was to meet and work with new customers who were from different levels and countries. It means that I got a very good knowledge in communication as well as fluent languages such as Chinese and English.
By the way, thank you very much for your time and consideration. I really hope can have the opportunity to donate my experience and knowledge to the company in the nearly future.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
(Sender add)
Date: 10 Jan 2006
Dear Mr.XX/ Ms.YY
After have referred the advertisement in the Saigon Times Daily on 09 Jan 2006, I understand that your company is now looking for a Manager Assistant . I am very interested in it and hope that can have an opportunity to interview with the post mentioned.
As you will see from my enclosed CV, I have completed an intensive course in Communication English and also got a Certificate in Business English. Two years before, a Singapore company gave me an opportunity to put my theory learnt into practice and acquired the working experience. My responsibility was to meet and work with new customers who were from different levels and countries. It means that I got a very good knowledge in communication as well as fluent languages such as Chinese and English.
By the way, thank you very much for your time and consideration. I really hope can have the opportunity to donate my experience and knowledge to the company in the nearly future.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
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) . I am very interested in this post and hope that you will give me the opportunity to attend an interview. As you will see from my enclosed CV, I have completed an intensive course in English Communication and also got a Certificate in Business English.
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- I am very interested in this post and hope that you will give me the opportunity to attend an interview.
- As you will see from my enclosed CV, I have completed an intensive course in English Communication and also got a Certificate in Business English.
- Two years ago, a Singapore company gave me the opportunity to put theory into practice with some work experience.
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I saw your advertisement in the Saigon Times Daily on 09 Jan 2006 and I understand that your company is looking for a Manager Assistant (surely it is Assistant Manager or Manager's Assistant?) . I am very interested in this post and hope that you will give me the opportunity to attend an interview.
As you will see from my enclosed CV, I have completed an int
As you will see from my enclosed CV, I have completed an int
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Dear Sir
Thanks for your help in adjusting my writing, however, I also wish to know if there is anything can improve, I mean do I need to add some more information or it is good enough for a covering letter like that. Can I have your idea?
Hope can hear from you soon,
Thanks & Regards,
Thanks for your help in adjusting my writing, however, I also wish to know if there is anything can improve, I mean do I need to add some more information or it is good enough for a covering letter like that. Can I have your idea?
Hope can hear from you soon,
Thanks & Regards,
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I think it is fine as a covering letter. It is a mistake to put too much information in these letters; the important stuff should be in the CV/resume/application. It's not unusual for whoever is doing the final short-listing of the applicants for interview to just be looking at the CV.
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Hello Sir
Please help me to edit my below enquiry which will be sent to the customer later. Thanks ^^
Dear .../...
Further to the phone conversation, please see our below enquiry of broken rice:
_ Grades : 20%, 25%, 35% and 100% broken
Please help me to edit my below enquiry which will be sent to the customer later. Thanks ^^
Dear .../...
Further to the phone conversation, please see our below enquiry of broken rice:
_ Grades : 20%, 25%, 35% and 100% broken
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Dear .../...
Further to our phone conversation, here is the information on broken rice:
_ Grades: 20%, 25%, 35% and 100% broken
_ Shipment: from Feb to July 2006
_ Quantity: 10,000 - 15,000 mt per month
Further to our phone conversation, here is the information on broken rice:
_ Grades: 20%, 25%, 35% and 100% broken
_ Shipment: from Feb to July 2006
_ Quantity: 10,000 - 15,000 mt per month
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Dear Guru
What do you think if I make a little bit change like this:
Please see the below information on our broken rice's enquiry as your demand:
_ Grades: 20%, 25%, 35% and 100% broken
_ Shipment: from Feb to July 2006
What do you think if I make a little bit change like this:
Please see the below information on our broken rice's enquiry as your demand:
_ Grades: 20%, 25%, 35% and 100% broken
_ Shipment: from Feb to July 2006
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No, Kawaitiet-- that is as incorrect as your first effort. Use my version.
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Hi Guru
Firstly, thanks for your prompt reply.
Well, I wonder if you can tell me where and why is incorrect? You know, I really want to know the reason, at least I can remind and overcome it, is it related to the grammar, vocabulary or the word's position? Please I need your advise
Again, thank you very much for your generosity
Regards,
Kawaii
Firstly, thanks for your prompt reply.
Well, I wonder if you can tell me where and why is incorrect? You know, I really want to know the reason, at least I can remind and overcome it, is it related to the grammar, vocabulary or the word's position? Please I need your advise
Again, thank you very much for your generosity
Regards,
Kawaii
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It is long and time-consuming for me to try to analyze your whole letters, Kawaitiet, since I don't know what parts of the changes in language you understand and what parts you do not. Please compare the two (or three) versions, and then ask us specific questions about use.
As for your second attempt, here are a few notes:
Rice should not be possessive; it cannot own anyt
As for your second attempt, here are a few notes:
Rice should not be possessive; it cannot own anyt
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