Re: Please correct my Letter of Motivation and give me some Hints

Brakes India Ltd.,

Kind attn: Mr. Devarajan,

Dear Mr. Devarajan,

Please accept my season’s greetings and good wishes for continued prosperity and achievement of new mile stones in quality and business targets for your esteemed company.

A last couple of years have been very eventful for us here at MPM with the addition of new dimensions to our product range like Ferro Silicon Magnesium and the consolidation of our core competent business range of carnations adhesives and Cost Inoculants.

I would like to up date you the salient features of our business activities:

a) In our business of Lustron Carbonations Adhesives, we have now completed around ….. years of continued supplies of Coal Dust of Lustron to Rico Auto Components recording a business volume of approximately 600 – 700 Tons in the current calendar year.

b) We have added Ashok Iron Works, Unit III at Machhe Industrial Estate, Belgaum as one of our prestigious customers for their new KW line.

c) We are holding a emerging position in Indian market today for Ferro Silicon Magnesium and range of STD Barium Inoculants fine preferred application in prestigious foundries like Tata Motors Ltd., Jamshedpur with 100% of their CT Cylinder Blocks using MPM Std, Rico Auto Components………………….. & so on.

I am attaching a list of our prestigious customers for your kind reference in support of our position in quality, reliability and consistency to supply of the above mentioned products.

Brakes India Ltd., remains one of our most admired and desired addition to our customer base. We would like to offer to you once again our services and we are confident that we will be in a position to meet not only your aspiration, reliability, quality, consistency to supply, but will also offer you very cost effective prices for these products. We need an opportunity to do business with you. We have assiduously developed base very high profile foundry in India as you will see in the list attached herewith.

These are foundries which divert castings whose quality is second to none and whose business and technical processes are among the best not only in the country but also internationally. We would like to be a part of the some business excellence for which Brakes India Ltd., has a path pressure. Please guide us how we can fit into some businessnish in your company.

Thank you and with best regards,

Deepak Chowdhary