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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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Re: Please check my sentence!!!

SMS is committed to provide a safe, violence-free

workplace for both its customers and its employees.

It strictly prohibits the employees, agency

contract workers, consultants, customers,

visitors, or anyone else on SMS premises or engaging

in SMS-related activity from behaving in a violent

or threatening manner.
  

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Dear sir, You may say: «SMS is committed to providing a safe, violence-free workplace for its customers and employees. » Kind regards, Goldmund

  • Dear sir, You may say: «SMS is committed to providing a safe, violence-free workplace for its customers and employees.
  • » Kind regards, Goldmund
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Dear sir,

You may say:

«SMS is committed to providing a safe, violence-free workplace for its customers and employees. It strictly prohibits employees, contractors, consultants, customers, visitors, or anyone else either present on SMS premises or engaging in SMS-related activities from behaving in a violent or threatening manner.»

Kind regards,

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