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Goodman Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Re: Learn to comment in proper English
Hi Flag,
I am sorry. Maybe it’s me. I had trouble understanding what you tried to say. I think you had tried so hard to make it sound impressive by using big words and complex sentence structure that the meaning ended up astray. My advice is, review your basics and try not to get fancy until you have the fundamental down. Perhaps, someone can offer a second opinion.
I am sorry. Maybe it’s me. I had trouble understanding what you tried to say. I think you had tried so hard to make it sound impressive by using big words and complex sentence structure that the meaning ended up astray. My advice is, review your basics and try not to get fancy until you have the fundamental down. Perhaps, someone can offer a second opinion.
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Remembering 911 Attacks is important, and pushing in peace cause is more important, especially at a time when building a harmonious society is taking precedence over the blind pursuit of antiterrorism. In some way, the New Orleans Tragedy is a more grievous loss for Americans. Because, after 911 Attacks the Americans' patriotism has been well spurred, the tragedy still happened.
- Remembering 911 Attacks is important, and pushing in peace cause is more important, especially at a time when building a harmonious society is taking precedence over the blind pursuit of antiterrorism.
- In some way, the New Orleans Tragedy is a more grievous loss for Americans.
- Because, after 911 Attacks the Americans' patriotism has been well spurred, the tragedy still happened.
- Life generally presents many complexities, after all.
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Remembering 911 Attacks is important, and pushing in peace cause is more important, especially at a time when building a harmonious society is taking precedence over the blind pursuit of antiterrorism. In some way, the New Orleans Tragedy is a more grievous loss for Americans. Because, after 911 Attacks the Americans' patriotism has been well spurred, the tragedy still happened. Life generally pr
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Ok, I am going to take a wild shot at it because your tone is still not very clear and lit's acking continuity and logic. This is what I think you try to say.
It’s important for us to remember the 911 attack. Yet, it’s more important for us to keep pursuing the cause for peace at a time of uncertainty. We need to place priority on maintaining social order and h
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PS: 86,400 hits for "911 attack" in Google search, 157,000 hits for "911 Attacks."
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