0hallo, i am applying university in germany. can some one please help me to correct my mistake. please. I am afraid that my motivation letter is not good enough or i do not know what am i writting some times. 02br
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00I am writing to you to apply for the XXXXXXXX for XXX XX XXX at XXXXX. I finished my A level back in year 2007 and majored in the required subjects of Physics and Mathematics. 02h1

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00I could say that, becoming an engineer and to have the chance to study abroad have always been the most idealistic ambition in my life, since I was young. 02h1

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00Why Electrical Engineering? As we know, the formation of modern world nowadays is not build in a single day. This is due to the gradually develop in science and technology. In order to achieve such an advanced level in those modern fields, after all, the study and application of electrical play the most important role in each and every aspect. Take, for example, the occurrence of major blackouts in all over the world. During the blackout, most of the systems in transportation, government institution, commercial organization, public facility, computer, networking and so on are affected. As a result, the situation in the society, institution and business line are in a state of chaos. Apparently, this show that how dependant human being is on electricity. 02h1

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00However, I came to realize that my knowledge is still limited in many areas and yet I have the strong interest in electrical field. As a member of new generation, I wish I could make significant contribution to the future by improving my knowledge and understanding of Electrical Engineering in not only the theory but also the method as well as the practical and this, nevertheless, is one of my aims in completing my education with studying in Electrical Engineering.02h1

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00Personally, I am willingly to accept criticisms and new ideas from others and can be easily work as a team by carrying out the principle of my life which is tolerance, hard-working, flexible and organized. In addition, I would love the experience of meeting people from all around the world, learning other cultures and new languages. 02h1

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00With my academic background and relevant studying field, I am confidence that I am qualify and able to perform well in this programme. I would be grateful if you could give my application yours most favourable consideration. I look forward to your positive response.02h1

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00Yours faithfully, 02h1

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