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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Re: CV+MOTIVATION LETTER
Googlando ho trovato il tuo CV e devo proprio farti un complimento sia per la tua capacita' espressiva in inglese sia per la tua presentazione. sono sicura che attirera' l'attenzione che desideri. Dal momento che richiedi un feedback provo a darti il mio, anche se non sono inglese. Si tratta comunque di dettagli, il tuo lavoro e' davvero egregio.
in bocca al lupo!
alessandra
1. Intestazione: Dear Robert o Dear Mr Schmidt, non Dear nome+cognome
2. In generale semplificherei le frasi: + brevi e con max 2 aggettivi o 1 se composto es. detail-oriented: es. I know/was told/read.. that you have a vacancy for an internship in the ... area and you are looking for a so-and-so... person/trainee/student. As I am a determined and ... person who could make a difference in that area I would like you to consider my application: I am available for five months starting October 2006.
3. Solo per rendere + fluido l'inglese:
I have always thought that the theory is the base of everything , but at the same time I am convinced that experience is what makes a person unique(cosa vuoi dire? qui sarei piu' personale e mi esprimerei in prima persona, es.: From my studies I have built quite a sound theoretical background but I am always looking for new opportunities to put my knowledge base into practice and develop my skills)
An internship in your company can definitely provide me with a real opportunity for gaining the valuable hands-on experience (niente virgolette, e' un'espressione comune) that I am looking for. I am confident that the courses I attended in marketing, event management, communication and promotion of tourism, business administration, would make me a good candidate for this internship.
I would define myself as an energetic and open-minded achiever with a dynamic, goal-orientated attitude and with an insatiable appetite to keep learning. I have always been very committed to deliver excellent results in my studies (academic career e' la carriera professionale di docenza) and in my previous working experience. I do wish to have the opportunity to prove my commitment to excellence also to your company.
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me via email. I look forward to your response. I am also available to schedule a preliminary telephone interview.Thank you for your time and consideration.
Kind regards (ormai piu' frequente di sincerely)
in bocca al lupo!
alessandra
1. Intestazione: Dear Robert o Dear Mr Schmidt, non Dear nome+cognome
2. In generale semplificherei le frasi: + brevi e con max 2 aggettivi o 1 se composto es. detail-oriented: es. I know/was told/read.. that you have a vacancy for an internship in the ... area and you are looking for a so-and-so... person/trainee/student. As I am a determined and ... person who could make a difference in that area I would like you to consider my application: I am available for five months starting October 2006.
3. Solo per rendere + fluido l'inglese:
I have always thought that the theory is the base of everything , but at the same time I am convinced that experience is what makes a person unique(cosa vuoi dire? qui sarei piu' personale e mi esprimerei in prima persona, es.: From my studies I have built quite a sound theoretical background but I am always looking for new opportunities to put my knowledge base into practice and develop my skills)
An internship in your company can definitely provide me with a real opportunity for gaining the valuable hands-on experience (niente virgolette, e' un'espressione comune) that I am looking for. I am confident that the courses I attended in marketing, event management, communication and promotion of tourism, business administration, would make me a good candidate for this internship.
I would define myself as an energetic and open-minded achiever with a dynamic, goal-orientated attitude and with an insatiable appetite to keep learning. I have always been very committed to deliver excellent results in my studies (academic career e' la carriera professionale di docenza) and in my previous working experience. I do wish to have the opportunity to prove my commitment to excellence also to your company.
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me via email. I look forward to your response. I am also available to schedule a preliminary telephone interview.Thank you for your time and consideration.
Kind regards (ormai piu' frequente di sincerely)
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