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Spooner Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Rather than
1. Patients need a care that encourages and helps them to get back to the society again as healthy human beings rather than isolating them from the society.
2. Patients need a care that encourages and helps them to get back to the society again as healthy human beings rather than a care that isolates them from the society.
First, I want to ask if the first one is grammatically sound.
Second, do I need to repreat "care" like I did in the second sentence or is the first sentence OK as it is?
Thank you.
2. Patients need a care that encourages and helps them to get back to the society again as healthy human beings rather than a care that isolates them from the society.
First, I want to ask if the first one is grammatically sound.
Second, do I need to repreat "care" like I did in the second sentence or is the first sentence OK as it is?
Thank you.
Top answer
You need to do this: 1. Patients need care that encourages and helps them to return to society as healthy human beings rather than isolates them.
- You need to do this: 1.
- Patients need care that encourages and helps them to return to society as healthy human beings rather than isolates them.
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You need to do this:
1. Patients need care that encourages and helps them to return to society as healthy human beings rather than isolates them.
1. Patients need care that encourages and helps them to return to society as healthy human beings rather than isolates them.
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Thanks for the suggestion.
How about the second one? Is it OK to use?
Patients need care that encourages and helps them to get back to the society again as healthy human beings rather than care that isolates them from the society.
How about the second one? Is it OK to use?
Patients need care that encourages and helps them to get back to the society again as healthy human beings rather than care that isolates them from the society.
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