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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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I think the brave man is one who can control anger. It took a lot of courage to let something go and forgive someone for doing something wrong . We are human we all made mistakes and sometime we knew, what we did was wrong but still we tried to prove ourselves that we were right. Why this happen? Why we are so much shallow? Why don’t we have courage to accept our mistakes? Possibly, some of us are stubborn, other are conscious with the question “what people will think” . How silly, Lots of time I were in the same shoes . Then I analyze myself why I did that? The replied I got is “ I was trying to prove that I am smart cookie” . You have to chuckle about many things people do. I developed one habit now to analyze the people what they do, why they do, why they bitch about certain things . Now I think if your fellow man, friend, colleagues, relatives made some mistakes , you should try to think in a positive way to forgive them . I know there should be line on the sand. Love is very beautiful emotion. You can win every body’s heart .

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Anonymous I think [color=blue]the[/color] brave man is [color=blue]the[/color] one who can control his anger. It took a lot of courage to let something go and forgive someone for doing something wrong . We are human[color=blue].

— Avangi

  • Anonymous I think [color=blue]the[/color] brave man is [color=blue]the[/color] one who can control his anger.
  • It took a lot of courage to let something go and forgive someone for doing something wrong .
  • We are human[color=blue].
  • We have[/color] all made mistakes[color=blue],[/color] and sometimes we knew what we did was wrong[color=blue].
  • But[/color] still we tried to prove to ourselves that we were right.
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I think [color=blue]the[/color] brave man is [color=blue]the[/color] one who can control his anger. It took a lot of courage to let something go and forgive someone for doing something wrong . We are human[color=blue]. We have[/color] all made mistakes[color=blue],[/color] and sometimes we knew what we did was wrong[color=blue]. But[/color] still we tried
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Anonymous
I think the brave man is [color=blue]the[/color] one who can control [color=blue]his[/color] anger. It took a lot of courage to let something go and forgive someone for doing something wrong.

We are human[color=blue]. We have[/color] all made mistakes[color=blue],[/color] and sometimes we knew what we did was wrong[color=blue]. But[/color] still we
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