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Mr. Tom Posted 16 years ago
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Rainy weather and watery eyes

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Do you find the following description OK? If no, could you please edit it?

Amidst all other things, he couldn't help but notice the sharp contrast between the rainy weather and her watery eyes. Both had so much in common.

Thanks,

Tom
  

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Hi Tom, Do you find the following description OK? If no, could you please edit it? Amidst all other things, he couldn't help but notice the sharp contrast between the rainy weather and her watery eyes.

  • Hi Tom, Do you find the following description OK?
  • If no, could you please edit it?
  • Amidst all other things, he couldn't help but notice the sharp contrast between the rainy weather and her watery eyes.
  • Both had so much in common.
  • You don't need 'both'.
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Hi Tom,

Do you find the following description OK? If no, could you please edit it?

Amidst all other things, he couldn't help but notice the sharp contrast between the rainy weather and her watery eyes. Both had so much in common.

You don't need 'both'. 'In common' suggests 'both'.

If they had a lot in common, where was the contrast?

Among ot

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