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Pierre Boisvert Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Raining day
First of all, I’m not a huge fan of wasting my energy and time when I can learn or gain a new skill. During a beautiful and warm day, I must go outside and enjoy the day. For me, this is a moment where I can be alone and think about what I should do during the next week and this is a good physical exercise. With a positive forecast, I will go outside as much as possible because the summer is short in Quebec. After 3 months, the weather is more cold and the days are shorter.
During a raining day, this is where I turn on my comfy mode. I will start with 2 questions to kick off my mindset. What I should do when it’s raining. These days are perfect for me to watch my favorite TV show on Netflix, Write or play video games. For instance, right now I just start watching House of Cards and this is my favorite show at the moment. And even today, all of these TV show on Netflix are interesting and I always appreciate when they create a good story with a content base on real facts. Also, I like to clean the house and put every objet at the right place (Kind of weird I know). Second question, why it doesn’t matter. I will point out that I’m not lazy and I always work to do my homework before the final day. I can take a rest without any problem and I will reach the goal. I can enjoy my leisure and get comfy instead of working on a project because I was lazy a week ago. I am an easygoing person when I don’t have pressure at all. I will watch Netflix a whole day and I know this is awful but I like doing that. However, I still need to watch the whole TV show in a week and I can’t watch an episode every week. I just can’t wait and I want to know the whole story quick. Overall, It’s important to have a good balance in life – If not we will have an unsuitable life and I believe we are all wise human and we can spend the right amount of time on each activity.
Where I can improve or made a mistake?
During a raining day, this is where I turn on my comfy mode. I will start with 2 questions to kick off my mindset. What I should do when it’s raining. These days are perfect for me to watch my favorite TV show on Netflix, Write or play video games. For instance, right now I just start watching House of Cards and this is my favorite show at the moment. And even today, all of these TV show on Netflix are interesting and I always appreciate when they create a good story with a content base on real facts. Also, I like to clean the house and put every objet at the right place (Kind of weird I know). Second question, why it doesn’t matter. I will point out that I’m not lazy and I always work to do my homework before the final day. I can take a rest without any problem and I will reach the goal. I can enjoy my leisure and get comfy instead of working on a project because I was lazy a week ago. I am an easygoing person when I don’t have pressure at all. I will watch Netflix a whole day and I know this is awful but I like doing that. However, I still need to watch the whole TV show in a week and I can’t watch an episode every week. I just can’t wait and I want to know the whole story quick. Overall, It’s important to have a good balance in life – If not we will have an unsuitable life and I believe we are all wise human and we can spend the right amount of time on each activity.
Where I can improve or made a mistake?
Top answer
First of all, I’m not a huge fan of wasting my energy and time when I can learn or gain a new skill. During a beautiful and warm day, I must go outside and enjoy the day. For me, this is a moment where I can be alone and think about what I should do during the next week and this is a good physical exercise.
- First of all, I’m not a huge fan of wasting my energy and time when I can learn or gain a new skill.
- During a beautiful and warm day, I must go outside and enjoy the day.
- For me, this is a moment where I can be alone and think about what I should do during the next week and this is a good physical exercise.
- With a positive forecast, I will go outside as much as possible because the summer is short in Quebec.
- After 3 months, the weather is more cold er and the days are shorter.
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First of all, I’m not a huge fan of wasting my energy and time when I can learn or gain a new skill. During a beautiful and warm day, I must go outside and enjoy the day. For me, this is a moment where I can be alone and think about what I should do during the next week and this is a good physical exercise. With a positive forecast, I will go outside as much as possible because the summer is shor
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Pierre BoisvertWhere I can improve or made a mistake?You should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs. Doing that makes it much easier to read. Once you have done that, you can post it again and wait for a reply.
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AnonymousYou should separate your text into sentences and paragraphs. Doing that makes it much easier to read. Once you have done that, you can post it again and wait for a reply.Hi Anon;
I see that this is your "stock answer" to nearly all postings of this kind.
It is neither constructive nor helpful.
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But it's a good idea to separate my idea! I will do it next time
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AlpheccaStarsHi Anon;I see that this is your "stock answer" to nearly all postings of this kind.It is neither constructive nor helpful.It would be very helpful for anyone who is considering reading and replying to very large, continuous texts like what is in the first post. It can be the basis for deciding whether or not to reply with corrections and comments
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AnonymousIt can be the basis for deciding whether or not to reply with corrections and comments, or not.Perhaps for you, but not for everyone.
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