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Pieter Posted 23 years ago

Rain

Rain


little nails slashing about the naked muddy pool

infinite watery water on the water
the thirst has been tired of drinking
I spread the sunshine over my shoulder

rainbow imitates a child’s smile in the afternoon
  

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I love it. It is so sweet. I like the imagery.

  • I love it.
  • It is so sweet.
  • I like the imagery.
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I love it. It is so sweet. I like the imagery.
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Yeah, that's nice Pieter..
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I like this one. The imagery is very graphic.

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