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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

radio-controlled

Hello everyone
Is it ok to write "a radio-controlled motor-propelled model submarine"
Thanks
Chris
  

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" As I'm sure you know, too many hyphenated compounds will look awkward. Two is probably okay, but if you wanted to add a third, you should consider rewriting. Although grammatically correct, it's not good style.

  • " As I'm sure you know, too many hyphenated compounds will look awkward.
  • Two is probably okay, but if you wanted to add a third, you should consider rewriting.
  • Although grammatically correct, it's not good style.
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Hi Chris,
Put a comma after "radio-controlled."

As I'm sure you know, too many hyphenated compounds will look awkward. Two is probably okay, but if you wanted to add a third, you should consider rewriting. Although grammatically correct, it's not good style.
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Hi,

I'd put a comma after 'radio-controlled'.

Clive
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Hello
Thank you both very much for replying to my question.
Could I use and in the sentence instead of a comma or is a comma better?
Thanks I appreciate your help
Chris
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A comma is much better.
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Thanks. You've been a great help.
Chris

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