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Guest Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Racing sponsorship letter

Hi, I am new to this site. I really need help with sponsorship. I am a young, female race car driver and I need some sponsors for this season. My goal for this year is to race in as many races as I can and win. In the spring I might get an opportunity to go out to Indianapolis, Indiana and test a bigger sized up race car. My long term goal is to race out in Indiana and race in bigger races(NASCAR/Indy 500). But for now I am racing locally (Pennsylvania). I will race at different tracks throughout the region. My brother also races so that is an advantage for sponsors. When drivers get a sponsor, the tracks always announces the sponsors and we will have an opportunity to wear the sponsor's items, like t-shirts, hats, etc.
I hope that is enough.. I want to stop losing sleep over this!! I just don't know how to write it! Emotion: sad Thanks in advance!
  

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Hello Guest What makes you think you don't know how to write it? It already sounds good to me. MrP

  • Hello Guest What makes you think you don't know how to write it?
  • It already sounds good to me.
  • MrP
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Hello Guest

What makes you think you don't know how to write it?

It already sounds good to me.

MrP
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I just don't know how to start it. And I don't know how to word the sentences so it "draws" in the businesses...
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Hello dirtracer5

I don't know very much about sponsorship letters. But I myself would probably have three brief paragraphs in my letter, with appropriate headings:

1. Who am I, and what do I plan to do?
2. How could this benefit you?
3. What will it cost?

#1 would include much of what you've already posted. It sounds enthusiastic and energetic.

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thanks, that gives me an idea. This is my first time doing this... so I am new too!Emotion: smile
Thanks again! -W.
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EDIT:Sorry to dig up an old post but it relates to what I need help with

Can you guys give me any pointers as to how I should world my letter? I wrote mine following what suggestions you gave so here's my letter(removed my contact info, name, etc.):


To Whom It May Concern

Hello, My name is ****** ******. I am 17 and I’m building a race car for the Auto Clearing Moto
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Pretty good but you haven't actually asked them to sponsor you and I would get to the point more quickly. My suugestion

Hello, My name is ****** ******. I am 17 and I’m building a race car for the Auto Clearing Motor Speedway Thunderstocks class for the 2007 season. I am writing to invite you to be my sponsor. In return for your support I will provide as much publicity for your company as
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hey i am a go karter and i was wondering if some 1 could write me a sponsorship letter for me plzz reply with qestions and answers
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Hi,

Sorry, we don't write letters for people. But if you try to write it yourself, we will check it for you and offer ypu advice.

First, read this whole thread and you will find ideas that will help you.

Best wishes, Clive
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The Series
Our MODIFIED will compete in the LAKESIDE SPEEDWAY Weekly Racing Series located in Kansas City Kansas.
We will also try to run several United States Modified Touring Series events.
In this series we will compete against some of the best modified drivers and teams in the country.
USMTS crowns a champion for the region, and then an overall champion for the country, whi
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in my opinion, i'd leave out ANYTHING that suggests injury, or crashing! that could look like a major liability to a prospective client!! use only positive text...no doom & gloom.

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