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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Qusetion of Sentences.

Hello.

If you find something wrong in them help me check these sentences.
Thank you very much.

Playing games can stimulate the brain thinking of people, and thus work out their dilemmas

Playing games help people melt into society smoothly, and thus maintain the stability of society.

Which stencnce is correct?

A company would rather allot their money to protect the environment than advocate the arts.

A company should allot their money to not the sponsor of arts but the protection of environments.
  

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I'm afraid none of these are quite right. Your first sentences. Playing games stimulates your brain, enhances your thinking skills and equips you to work out problems.

  • I'm afraid none of these are quite right.
  • Your first sentences.
  • Playing games stimulates your brain, enhances your thinking skills and equips you to work out problems.
  • (You can change this for 'peoples' if you prefer).
  • don't understand melt into society - learn to socialise?
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I'm afraid none of these are quite right.

Your first sentences.

Playing games stimulates your brain, enhances your thinking skills and equips you to work out problems. (You can change this for 'peoples' if you prefer).

Playing games helps people ?don't understand melt into society - learn to socialise? and thus helps maintain the stability of the society

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Hello nona the brit
Thank you for your help.

1. I would rather die than surrender myself to the enemies. This sentence means that I choose to die. Is it correct?

I hope that a company would rather allot their money to protect the environment than advocate the arts.


2. A company can suupot either the sponsor of arts or the protection of environments. I h

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