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English2 Posted 18 years ago
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"We just noticed that you have released the deposited fund to us???"

Hi,

I need your help to check my sentence here...

"We just noticed that you have released the deposited fund to us."

I know there's something wrong, but I just can't figure it out ...

Please help me!

Thank you!
  

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English2 Hi, I need your help to check my sentence here... " I know there's something wrong, but I just can't figure it out ... Please help me!

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  • " I know there's something wrong, but I just can't figure it out ...
  • Please help me!
  • Thank you!
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English2
Hi,

I need your help to check my sentence here...

"We just noticed that you have released the deposited fund to us."

I know there's something wrong, but I just can't figure it out ...

Please help me!

Thank you!

Hi. I think there is a need to use Passive Voice.

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>Am I correctly understand meaning of your sentence?

This is bad English. Try to find in what respect.
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Diefferent meanings:

We've just noticed that you released the deposited funds to us. We've just observed ....

We've just been notified that you released the deposited funds to us. We've been told that ...
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FandorinHi. I think there is a need to use Passive Voice.

"We have been just noticed that you release deposited fund on us"

Am I correctly understand meaning of your sentence?

Hi Fandorin,

From your sentence, the "we" was noticed by someone else. From my sente
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Hi Fandorin,

From your sentence, the "we" was noticed by someone else. From my sentence, the "we" was noticed by ourselves.

To Marius Hancu; it's different, not diefferent. If I'm not mistaken.
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Marius Hancu>Am I correctly understand meaning of your sentence?

This is bad English. Try to find in what respect.
"Do I understand you correct?" or "Am I mistaken?" Is it more correct?
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FandorinHi. I think there is a need to use Passive Voice.

"We have been just noticed that you release deposited fund on us"

Am I correctly understand meaning of your sentence?

Hi Fandorin,

From your sentence, the "we" was
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Fandorin"We have been just noticed that you released deposited funds on us"

Yes, you're right.. Firstly, I understand that someone notices us and due to this someone else transfers money on our account. Therefore I use Passive Voice. Am I mistaken?

Well, I don't quite understand this myself, but I'll go along Mr.
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English2
Fandorin"We have been just noticed that you released deposited funds on us"

Yes, you're right.. Firstly, I understand that someone notices us and due to this someone else transfers money on our account. Therefore I use Passive Voice. Am I mistaken?

Well, I don't quite underst
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No respond?

Well, I guess my sentence was in correct English then.

Thank you, everyone! Emotion: smile

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