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Xfallinangelx Posted 21 years ago
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"she killed her self becuz of me"


She was only 14 Her dad was dead her mom was very sickher Brother was gone she was all alone in this world until one day she saw Him she looked at him and knew he was the one she tried to talk to him but he didn`t listen she loved him even tho she didn`t know him she prayed for him she dreamed of him she hoped someday he would see her and love her she went on everyday hopeing to see him to talk to him to
fall more inlove with him until the day she saw her with him with his arm arond her she saw him kiss her she droped everything she started to cry she knew what she was gonna do now she was feeling so Hurt so cold and so lonely the only thing she wanted to do was die she left a note it said "Tell him i loved him tell them i cared tell him i knew he was the one tell him im sorry" then she left her house 3 weeks later her mom came home with her brother they walked in the house so happy to be home they yelled her name but she didn`t come they saw the note her mom started to read it she was almost in tears she ran out of the house her brother called 911 said "we have a missing girl"a few days went by no one had seen her her brother went looking everyday from am-pm her mom waited at the phone a month went by one day a guy came and knocked on the door he said "are you looking for a girl who looks like this?" he held out a pic of a girl with blood on her Hands and all over face her mom started to cry her brother didn`t know why they didn`t know who this guy was that she talked about in the note so her mom asked the young man at the door "where did you get this?" he said "im not sure someone gave it to me a few weeks ago said this girl said she was inlove with me or something i got this note also" he handed the brother the note it said "i love you why did you love her? you were the one for me i`ll miss you Love always:Jessica" her mom said "oh my gosh..your the guy" the guy said "she killed her self becuz of me?" her mom said "im not sure she was so quite she had no friends she went to school and went home i wasn`t home her father is passed away her brother was always with me she went to church im not sure why she did what she did or where she did it" he left a few months went by her mom had died her brother was moving out of the house so he had to get everything outta the old house so he went in the attic it was Dark so he had to find a light when he did he saw a body with blood all over it it was his sister he ran out of the attic outta the house started freaking out he yelled "God why did she do it..why?" ........the end........................... even a little thing can make someone do something crazy dont not talk to someone


  

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