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COUME Posted 20 years ago
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"delivered on-site customised presentations" or "delivered customised pr...

0 Hello,02br
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00I wrote in my C.V.01b00 "delivered on-site customised presentations to prospective blue-chip customers" 02b00but after reading numerous times my C.V. I start to doubt about this sentence...02br
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00Should the "01b00on-site02b00" be positionned directly after the "01b00delivered02b00" or further in the sentence as below:02br
00"delivered customised presentations on-site to prospective blue-chip customers"02br
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00What would be the correct form?02br
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00Bests,02br
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0Hi Coume, 02br 02br 00Both are fine, although my preference would be the latter as it seems to me to stress the 'on-site' aspect a little. 02br 02br 00Clive0-

— Clive

  • 0Hi Coume, 02br 02br 00Both are fine, although my preference would be the latter as it seems to me to stress the 'on-site' aspect a little.
  • 02br 02br 00Clive0-
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0Hi Coume, 02br
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00Both are fine, although my preference would be the latter as it seems to me to stress the 'on-site' aspect a little. It also avoids any suggestion that the customizing was done on-site, so it makes the message clearer.02br
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