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Cogar Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

"Can the hotel hold my luggage"

Hello there,

Which sentence below is better phrased as a question? Thank you

Can the hotel hold my luggage after I checkout, until about 10pm on the same day.

Can the hotel hold my luggage until about 10pm on the same day after I checkout.
  

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They're both okay, but the phrasing "on the same day after I check out" took me a moment. m. that night?

  • They're both okay, but the phrasing "on the same day after I check out" took me a moment.
  • m.
  • that night?
  • The comma isn't necessary, but it seemed like you might want to pause and then explain about what time you would return for it.
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They're both okay, but the phrasing "on the same day after I check out" took me a moment.

Can the hotel hold my luggage after I check out, until about 10 p.m. that night?

The comma isn't necessary, but it seemed like you might want to pause and then explain about what time you would return for it.

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