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Peaceblinkfriend Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Quite a few, perhaps close to half, of them work at the store.

Hi all

Could you please comment if I have got the commas right in this sentence?

Quite a few, perhaps close to half, of them work at the store.

Thank you.

Best wishes
PBF

  

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I'd write it this way. Quite a few of them. perhaps close to half, work at the store.

— Clive

  • I'd write it this way.
  • Quite a few of them.
  • perhaps close to half, work at the store.
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I'd write it this way.

Quite a few of them. perhaps close to half, work at the store.

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It is correct enough, but I have to say awkward.

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